Beautiful, subtle merging of that moment of sporting destiny and the creative process
Many talk of poetry in sport but few know that it is very often the subject of poetry and that poetry is perfectly placed to portray the tension, the exhilaration, the atmosphere, the waiting and the helplessness. Poetry is also perfectly placed to show how sport reflects the ebbs and flows of the real world.
So ‘Pivotal’ by Tadhg Carey is more than simply a poem about sport. It is about the art of poetry, about life, the times we live in, and as such is the IS&T Pick of the Month for October 2025.
Tadhg Carey is a writer from Ireland. He is a Shared Island Freedom to Write Project awardee, was selected for the Cúirt International Festival New Writing Showcase, and was highly commended in the Fool for Poetry International Chapbook competition.
He has asked that his £25 ‘prize’ be donated to Access Sport.
Pivotal
When our plaything ricochets
falling
who knows where
everything hinging
on the line
there is a precise moment
when nothing is certain
a glorious terrifying uncontrollable
wait
the receptacle of our hopes
poised mid-
air with infinite trajectories
across the open field of possibility
time is slowed to an inhalation
and as I write this I am helpless
as an onlooker watching
from the sidelines
open-
mouthed
on the threshold of expression
not knowing where this will all end
nor what will follow the breaking
of the line
Other voters comments included:
This poem captures the momentum of sport, the exhilaration and tension, whilst also almost imperceptibly focuses our attention on the mechanics of writing poetry. The structural skill involved in the poem is impressive, and, like all good poems, it is about many things at once, and leaves us as readers also thinking about life choices, sliding-door moments and what it is to wait.
The form and line breaks of this poem masterfully capture the pace and immediacy of sports!
Beautiful poem, lovely sound work toward the beginning, creates a suspenseful atmosphere and plays with the shared metaphors between sports and poetry through the striking image of sightlines
Economic and between the lines.
Great structure, wording and rhythm!
It is difficult to write about sport tenderly, yet this poem achieves that. I was fully engaged with the flow of this moved and surprisingly moved by the end. I suspect, like many, this entire poem may be a metaphor. I admire the poets control, and form, is looks like rules of a game, but it goes further than anything that happens on the pitch.
Phenomenal piece, great depth
Wonderful line breaks and language that describes the helplessness of being an onlooker at a match
Love the tension throughout, building to a crescendo, which leaves a cliffhanger even at the end. Great poem.
The sense of anticipation is palpable and the uncertainty of outcome feels like a metaphor for the times we live in
Its pure simplicity but beautifully described slow motion of sport
Atmospheric
I love the way Tadhg uses line breaks to build tension in this poem. I am leaning forward in my seat with him 🙂
Amazing movement in this poem
It is so apt given the last 4 days of the Republic of Ireland football teams incredible performances.
It is spot the ball in words
Loved his description of waiting and helplessness.
The pacing and line breaks build anticipation for the reader. The scene is clear without being over-dramatised. A lean poem that rewards rereading.
A beautiful description of sitting on the sidelines – watching
Precise prose, simple but moving idea
Subtle poem on the process of writing
An Ars Poetica masquerading as a sport poem, and which also manages to meditate on the turning points in life. Very cleverly achieved.
Tadgh Carey is a fantastic poet whose work captures moments and life’s snippets clearly, like a well-taken photograph.
This is a skilled poet who brings tension, playfulness and drama to the page through use of line breaks, form and momentum. The poem’s simplicity belies both a real craft and depth.
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with youth, his vest drinks sweat,
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ethnographic record, reverb
haze of brisk lavender, wire mesh
trash of the park, sun-burnt song,
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negative space – astrological
movement in the ecology of court,
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stirring over him inter
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A zuihitsu of strings
for Ying
A lacquer table, gloss under fingertips. A raised stage with dark linen. A young woman smiles with her hand-held harp, its nine strings glistening. The room swells with the cadence of her pearly notes. Beneath the pendant lights—a vision of serenity.
*
The memory of my fingers at three—curious caterpillars, pressing the keys of a toy piano. My hawk-eyed parents note there is something there. The search for a teacher leads to a derelict with ochre walls, a staircase winding into an attic. Ramshackle shelves stacked with music, a hoary piano bundled in a corner, more carcass than instrument, still holding woody notes. A child set on the path.
*
Some things are forbidden: flat hands, locked wrists, crossed feet. Each lesson begins by flexing my soft bones, the conscious unknotting of my spine, my hands holding the fullness of an imaginary grapefruit, then letting the orb drop, but remembering its perfect curvature as my fingertips hit the ivory.
*
Outside the music room, birds peck at the shadows of coolibah trees. Their trunks peel—grand staffs shedding the curls of their braces. A gale strips all stray notes and sows them upon the dunes.
*
I tremble as my teacher looms—a backlit beast in the sandstone fortress. Her rattan cane, sleek and sharp, writes warnings on the wall. I watch it twitch—an uneasy metronome. My gaze must never waver from the score. A wayward glance at my fingers and a swoop of the cane leaves a searing kiss. The lub-dub of my pounding heart. High-treble strings shine across my metacarpal bones in lines of wet crimson. In time, they soften to mauve, and resemble a harp.
*
But the teacher is God. I learn to cover her hostility with irises and calendula, her features less macabre when obscured by flowers. Without a face, she is just a bouquet of desert blossoms. I watch from the bench as her protege plays the Ocean Étude. I marvel at the flawless articulation as my teacher transforms into a swathe of sunlit sea, basking in her student’s artistry. I aspire to be the perfect student—the one who elicits kind waves. I rub my wounds, and wait patiently by the shore.
*
Water bleeds onto city asphalt. The tremolo of the Enmore night—metal and slanted rain. Poems strung on tuning pins. The harp flowers in arpeggios.
*
This is who I always wanted to be—a musician with my edge off. The young woman on stage runs her fingers on the strings. The softness of her touch brings forth silver rivers. My meditation is interrupted by the ghost of my teacher’s cane. But I have harped on its cruelty too long. I shred it to splinters and bury its memory.
*
A brewery transformed—white linen and chandelier light. The humble beerhouse morphs into a ballroom of gold—a measure of healing, in the aura of the muse who plays the harp tonight.
Oormila Vijayakrishnan Prahlad is an award-winning Indian-Australian artist, poet, and improv pianist. She lives and works on traditional Gammergal land. Find her @oormilaprahld and www.instagram.com/oormila_paintings
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Hopscotch After Rain
Chalk squares bloom on cracked pavement,
washed, then reborn by small hands.
Footsteps drum in bright dust:
one hop, two hops, balance kept
inside a geometry of chance.
Stones leap, arcs of small planets
carved in ordinary air.
We whisper counts under breath,
touch down, turn, and lift again,
gravity loosening like a knot.
For an instant, we hover
between chalk and sky,
believing the ground is optional.
David A. Lee is a physician and emerging poet born on a Sioux Indian reservation whose work explores memory, play, and the human spirit. His poems will be appearing in literary journals, and he draws on heritage and clinical insight to illuminate ordinary moments.
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The art of cutting and stitching
My mother’s knife made the first cuts –
she removed my fertile light bulbs,
then stuffed my womb with shredded tissues.
Not cruelty, you understand, but failed
protection. Men have still hacked
and moulded. A chop, then extra plum pudding
for my breasts’ unevenly swung pendulum.
Another snip and twist for my goblin nose, dye
for my mouse-brown hair, sky-coloured glass
instead of the wince-green eyes I was born with.
Several broke my narrow hips to loosen
the bone hinge keeping my body closed to them.
Only in their minds, you understand, but the line
between thought and reality is far thinner
for some. None of this spoken aloud.
When she looked at the baby in her arms,
my mother saw woman, and the pain
of my whole life quaked through her.
She’d have stitched me a tail if she could,
the grace of a fish to leave her eggs
behind a stone and swim free.
That glint of silver, you understand, is not
the flash of her blade, but sunlight
glancing off those scales she tried to give me.
Sarah James/Leavesley is a prize-winning poet, fiction writer, journalist and photographer. Her latest collections are Darling Blue (Indigo Dreams), an ekphrastic book-length poetry narrative which won the Geoff Stevens Memorial Poetry Prize 2024, and Blood Sugar, Sex, Magic (Verve Poetry Press). Website: http://www.sarah-james.co.uk.
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Conscience
as taught her by the nuns was a bridle
on a young girl’s tongue pony frolic legs
a choke-hold on convolvulus excess
seductive as leaves skittering over moon
scatter grass dandelion pappus weighted
with girlish longings a burr hooked
onto the undercarriage of a rook in flight
that b r e a k i n g f r e e nuzzles into earth’s
amorous embrace wooed by rhapsodies
of amoral worms nurtured by clouds lavish
as a toddler’s sulk blasé gaze of wolf or super moon
till a blackbird at spring’s edge pipes their tarantella
stirs the first tousle-headed dente-de-lion
sun-gold tongues ravishing a winter-drowsy bee
Pratibha Castle –A finalist in Fool for Poetry Chapbook and McLellan Poetry Awards 2025, shortlisted in Fish, Live Canon and Bridport Prize, placed in Sonnet or Not and Plaza Competitions, widely published in magazines such as Under the Radar, Ink Sweat & Tears and Aftershock, was awarded third prize in Sonnet or Not. Her second pamphlet Miniskirts in The Waste Land was a PBS winter selection 2023.