Hope springs eternal… and goes, in part, towards Finola Scott’s ‘Tell me’ emerging as Ink Sweat & Tears’ Pick of the Month for June 2020. ‘Stunning’, ‘beautiful’ and ‘wonderful’ were only a few of the adjectives it engendered and voters also praised the poem’s craft, intelligence, language, concision and subtlety.
Finola‘s poems are published by New Writing Scotland, Lighthouse, Fenland Reed and Gutter among others. In lock-down she feels landlocked and sighs for shores. Makar of the Federation of Writers, her pamphlet, Much Left Unsaid is published by Red Squirrel Press.
Finola has asked that her £30 ‘prize’ be donated to Action Aid.
again in this ragged midnight
that intimacy will endure
waters aren’t rising and tomorrow
the fritillary butterfly will graze my garden
tell me that passion is not merely nocturnal
but a tsunami of connection no stormy tea-cup but
the measured procession of those ants
round that tree following the one true scent
tell me that risk is worth it
the woods are indeed dark and
there are promises
Other voters’ comments included:
Tell me that risk is worth it .. that there are promises. Such a poem of hope in dark days.
I am very fond of poems that riff on established work to good effect and this succinct, concise, precise poem makes brilliant use of Frost’s poem.
The language of love translated to descriptions of weather – avoids cliché. The possibility of it surviving in spite of all the dangers, perfect.
It feels both intensely personal and at the same time universal.
For the beautiful imagery and emotions conveyed in her poem, Finola gets my vote…
It spoke to me, I could taste every word.
Finola is a wonderful poet. I feel, as a woman who has brought up children alone and only just getting back to creative self discovery, it is deeply inspirational and joyous to watch a talented poet who is a wee bit older (nae offence) find their brave lyrical feet.
I love the message of hope and continuance
The poem just hits you between the eyes I felt it took my breath away I felt every word written
‘ragged midnight’ – BEAUTIFUL
Finola’s poem is wonderful. It draws the reader into its mystery with well crafted lines that show true talent and intuition. The imagery is so rich and the pace and rhythm of the poem is perfectly balanced and fine tuned.
Memorable and accomplished.
A stunning poem, so concise in its language yet wonderfully expansive in its reading.
It’s intimacy and concision speaks directly to the experiences we share.
I love the images created. The repetition of ‘tell me’ indicating the need to hear that indeed life will get better and we should take risks.
In these dark times we need a bit of hope. Beautifully crafted and sensual use of imagery
It’s a beautiful poem, surprising in its imagery whilst being utterly and recognisably true.
Finola’s work is always beautifully constructed and tells stories that we all need to hear.
my reason = ‘tell me that risk is worth it’
the subtlety of purpose in its language
It’s a beautiful poem that captures what living in lockdown in Scotland feels like right now
A reflection of a glimmer of hope in a time of dark uncertainty