{"id":15175,"date":"2017-11-16T16:03:07","date_gmt":"2017-11-16T16:03:07","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ink.verticalplus.co.uk\/archive\/?p=15175"},"modified":"2020-12-09T15:15:08","modified_gmt":"2020-12-09T15:15:08","slug":"octobers-pick-of-the-month-is-the-night-that-takes-our-shape-by-phil-powrie","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/inksweatandtears.co.uk\/archive\/octobers-pick-of-the-month-is-the-night-that-takes-our-shape-by-phil-powrie\/","title":{"rendered":"October&#8217;s Pick of the Month is &#8216;The night that takes our shape&#8217; by Phil Powrie"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Phil Powrie&#8217;s &#8216;The night that takes our shape&#8217;, an &#8216;<span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">evocative, melancholy and beautiful&#8217; poem is a much deserved Pick of the Month for October 2017.\u00a0 This dark and haunting poem struck a chord with many who felt it was one for our times; its reach even went as far as Charlottesville in the US.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>Phil writes books on French cinema, and teaches cinema and French at a university in the south of the UK. He has published poetry in <em>South<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><strong>The night that takes our shape<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>afraid to\u00a0abandon behind us the night that takes our shape<br \/>\nholding our\u00a0candles like flickering flags<br \/>\nhere am I a\u00a0soldier here a priest each with a weapon<br \/>\nyou march you\u00a0pray in a patch of light<\/p>\n<p>your limbs\u00a0pull away like garlands<br \/>\noffered\u00a0lightly to the clock\u2019s lazy eyes<br \/>\nyour hands\u00a0clasp around mine<br \/>\nand you sing\u00a0come dance with me come dance again<\/p>\n<p>and march and\u00a0pray<br \/>\nto hold the\u00a0night at bay<br \/>\nto keep\u00a0abstracted dark forever from the field<\/p>\n<p>more than\u00a0what we lost we regret what we never had<br \/>\nand dark\u00a0shapes come to haunt us<br \/>\nmarching and\u00a0praying with their unbearable battalions<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Voters&#8217; comments included:<\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">It is beautiful, so personal and yet so much about our times. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">the candles in the night make me think of protests, Nazis with torches, counter protesters (this vote is from Charlottesville). I feel the darkness. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">Elegant, succinct, evokes a clear image&#8230; <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">For its mood, and the melancholic form of dim extinguishing. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">A refined and all at once unsettling use of the sonnet form <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">It&#8217;s beautifully compressed and suggestive &#8212; a small gem. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">A powerfully evocative poem , tight, bare and visual <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">a moving poem, especially the way it sustains the multiple metaphor of darkness <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">the way it moves through night-time images, sensations and feelings like the mutable shadows one sees in the dark, like a dream. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">powerful shifting imagery that avoids the predictable relationships that often render poems staid and overly familiar in their metaphorical usage.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">lovely dark poem that fits our dark times and remind us of the need not to despair <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">I love the beautiful language and the carefully developed metaphors of the soldier and the priest. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">An intriguing, suggestive, atmospheric piece of writing that lingers in the mind and repays close attention and rethinking.<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">&#8230;It spoke to me, especially the verse &#8216;more than what we lost we regret what we never had&#8217;. It evoked a friendship I recently lost, or better said never managed to have. This is very true. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\">A stirring evocation of the paradoxes of night and darkness&#8211;rebirth, certainly, but also mourning and loss. <\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"response-text other-item ta-response-item\"><em>This is a lovely poem that merges images of faith, war, and love.<\/em> <\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; Phil Powrie&#8217;s &#8216;The night that takes our shape&#8217;, an &#8216;evocative, melancholy and beautiful&#8217; poem is a much deserved Pick of the Month for October 2017.\u00a0 This dark and haunting poem struck a chord with many who felt it was one for our times; its reach even went as far as Charlottesville in the US. 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